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Hello,

I would like to get feedback on our web site:

Web site address is: Premier Toastmasters

Thanks.
Mayur Shah.

Mayur,

The first thing I notice is the high traffic count on your site. I am not a big fan of the rainbow colors in the counter though.

I like the slide show, with members of your club, as wel as the building showing where you meet. I might modify the sentence "After you have checked us out for a few meetings, and feel interested, we would love to have you join our club membership to improve your communication and leadership skills." by adding "and enhancing our club with your talents and perspective."

Also, have someone in your club check your grammar on the site, The English language is a challenge at times, but you seem to be missing some words in some sentences. Even those of us that have English as our primary language can benefit from proof readers.

I would add some subtle background color to the home page. But, the background on the Meet Our Members is too bright for me.

The Meeting Information/directions page gives valuable information to non-employees on who to contact for a visitor badge. You may want to set up a contact group in case the SAA is not available or misses the email.

Check your agendas, you have 2 meetings for May 13.

In your Public downloads, remove the invitation. It is past due and if someone clicks on it, they may have a tough time getting it off screen. I had to close my browser to clear it.

I like the member's achievements page, but change the name to PREMEIR.

The fun page is fun, do you have other themed meetings? If so, you may want to make them separate pages, with a link from the fun page. A slide show would have been nice on this page as well, rather than scrolling.

Good job, just add some finishing touches and keep it up to date.

I agree with what Roger said.. I'd move the counter to the bottom and use a more professional color scheme on it.

then the bright green on the FUN page and the meet our member page is TOO much.. besides it needs to conform to Toastmaster branding for the most part. (www.toastmasters.org/~/media/B3C7B0A9EFB...BC1A7A0372A1657.ashx - I think it's on page 29)

The content on the fun page is very good but hopefully you can add something more recent than last November so that you always are up-to-date.

Overall a very good job.. keep up the good work.

I agree with the other comments - also, the slide show is shifting so fast, it's distracting. I would slow it down to change at more like five seconds.

Also, I think it's better for search results, and new visitors, to emphasize Toastmasters. So, for example, instead of
"Welcome to Premier (formerly known as Libertymoto), club #918568, website",
try
"Welcome to Premier Toastmasters, club #918568"

George

Hello Mayur;

I agree with what the others have said.

Your colors are to bright (green). Choose a softer color for the eyes. Also, you may not want to use blue for lettering, because blue is usually the color of a link to a website, plus it too is a little bright.

Your hit counter on the top page does not work, so maybe just use what they put up on the FTH website... It is at the bottom of the page, if you click the box that you want it to show up in the admin section. As a web developer, I believe the counter should be at the bottom of the page...

I won't rehash what others have said, but GREAT start on the website and keep up the excellent work.

Linda