I liked KaeBender's suggested wording changes; Malikmi Williams' suggested wording changes; Pam's explanatory sentence addition; John William's suggestions; Karen Leslie's suggestion of adding an explanation about the process "to the visitors pack". (Since I fear that an overload of visitor information before they sign-up might overwhelm their positive image of the club, I'd suggest her explanationt be added within a New Member Packet (such as an Orientation packet) that new members are handed instead.)
My suggestion is: Begin with a friendlier tone by Thanking them for joining the club.
Below is what I have been sending to all new members recently after I add them using the Member Management tool.
"Thank you for joining our club <club name><club number>. As your website administrator, I have added your name and email address provided on your application. Doing this triggered our website to send you a Confirmation message requesting you to confirm your approval that I added your personal contact information (name, email address, telephone #) that will be shared only between fellow members.
Before you can enjoy your membership, receive infrequent messages from club officers sent to all members, or access our meeting agendas on-line to sign-up to perform meeting roles or to speak, you have to approve having your information added on our website within 30 days. (If you forget, you will receive another reminder message and given a second chance.)
If you have any questions, feel free to contact me {club website administrator} at {club website administrator's email}"
Last edit: 6 years 5 months ago by desplainestoastmasters.
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